Vinay wrote his first poem as
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YOU OWE ME YOU
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Your Eyes owe something to me
Let them see me........
Your Ears owe something to me
Let them hear my song........
Your Heart owe something to me
Let it beat little harder for me........
Your Touch owe something to me
Let it feel me........
Your Kiss owe something to me
Let it kill me........
Your Soul owe something to me
Let it love me........
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MY response...funny one( atleast I felt that ways )
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Why I owe you something
Why I should hear you sing
Why my lips are your kiss
Why my heart does not miss
Why you feel you have a flick
Why can't u get "U are sick"
:-)
whatever...these would have been a reply to this...
but the fact ...U rock in poems also...I have a competitor ... :-)
-Tushar
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ReplyDeleteTres Bien!!!
ReplyDeleteThe first thing that came to my mind after scaning ur response was " I wish i could kill him, This guy wont let me kiss the limelight" He he..
The Spontaneity is Grand....its real BIG..Keep your Words Factory Going....
The Sun has no competitor..Dude.:)