वो दर्द ही तो है, बस कहीं कहा तो नहीं , वो बहा नहीं, तो क्या उसका कोई नाम नहीं ? वो लकीरें है हाथो में और कुछ भी तो नहीं , वो जिन्दगी, कहीं मौत का एक अंदाज़ तो नहीं ? -कबीर
i feel after some days.... may be years.... your creation will be part of student syllabus and those poor creatures will be asked to explain what author was trying to convey ..... and then above line are very true.....
What is pain, a swallowed cry ? It doesnt run, but it bleeds you dry ? Fate is a line, does an end to it lie ? A shadow to afterlife, is this life of my ?
too good..
ReplyDeletelast line is too amzaing..
how you can thnk to write such beautiful lines..
i feel after some days....
ReplyDeletemay be years....
your creation will be part of student syllabus
and those poor creatures will be asked to explain what author was trying to convey .....
and then above line are very true.....
use Creative common license ....to copyright this thing ......I hope you can estimate by that how much i liked it ...
ReplyDeleteThis can compel anyone to fall in love with the pain.
ReplyDelete"वो बहा नहीं, तो क्या उसका कोई नाम नहीं ?" If I am not of any use to the world doesn't mean i don't exist.
Amazed
-Fizz
What is pain, a swallowed cry ?
ReplyDeleteIt doesnt run, but it bleeds you dry ?
Fate is a line, does an end to it lie ?
A shadow to afterlife, is this life of my ?
~ NilS