Wednesday, May 06, 2009

I am hungry...

I am hungry, for the mom’s food,
At times left in tantrums being rude;

I want to be woken up in morning by my father,
Wanting two more minutes, than waking up rather;

I miss the bus stop and the bus to school,
Which was skipped,to prove I am a dude cool;

I want to steal chocolates from my sister cupboard,
A lot I have, but no one to share them on board;

I wish to draw the bicycle ride along the railway line,
Just be free like growing years moving like beeline;

I yearn for those class tests which gave me shiver,
Having those goose-bumps and that naughty fever;

I long for intrusion in late eve game, the calling tone,
Which I now hear with same warmth over the phone;

I wish, I want; I yearn and long for the life gone,
When I wished to be here and now wish for gone;

I see ‘Adee’ doing some what I did and doing all this one day,
Moving ahead and growing, smiling and missing gone someday...

-Tushar
PS: Adee is my elder nephew

6 comments:

  1. This reminds me of..

    Woh Kagaj kee kishti..(Jagjeet Singh's)
    Great one...specailly I like last para..

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  2. Tooooooo gud…

    U can go for writing a book now……at least wahan recession ka darr nahi hoga :P
    -Nimish
    M Spell Bound. Read Real Stuff after a long time.Gem
    -Vinay
    gr8 one after so many months, smthng i can relate with tsharma :-), especially the end ;-)
    -Rohit
    -Bravo
    GS
    Badiaa hai
    -Narayan

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  3. You try to borrow his Tantrum, his school bus,goose bumps , naughty fever to live what you call life.Away from this plastic world.

    Every time you see him you try to borrow a space in his world, the world that doesnot ensure to make you big or strong, doesnot promise to boost your ego but makes you happy.True and happy.

    No Money No ego No power can commensate for that warmth, cool attitude and class tests.



    Well Composed.And Well Mapped. Can’t ask for more. J I ll write something on summer vacations soon.
    -Vinay

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  4. Very nice Tushar..but 'life' means 'change' and time is something that can never be re-lived.
    'Reh jaati hain bas yadeen, meethi meethi yadeen'. Fortunately mother nature gave us a chance again to re-live those moments, in 'kids' !!!!(The most divine and beautiful form of us) :)

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  5. Anonymous3:28 PM

    Very true indeed....u sent me back to my own days spent in school, wandering in our locality and nearby railway line (when I used to think if I'll put a piece of iron below a train then it will turn into a magnet :-)),
    wandering with friends in full noon, in park nearby my home, and where not....those days when we were begining to be adults...those seasons in our locality of cricket, TT, Kanche, chhipan-chhupai, gallery......Those days....Ah! nothing is more precious than these gone by days of our childhood......also these present days we would miss again later......its really a puzzle, the more you think the more you would get drowned in it......it seems time puts on some sweet layer over our life moments...as they become older they start looking more mesmerizing.....sweet as nectar but still pierces our heart like an arrow and shoots forth our blood in the form of a fountain of emotions.....
    -Deepak Tiwari

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  6. nice due.. your skills are too good...
    -Taqreez

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