हर सपने का आगाज़ है एक ‘अगर’,
‘अगर’ यह हो तो बस होगा क्या ?
पर उसी का अंत होता है एक ‘मगर’,
मगर उन सपनो से ज़िन्दगी चलती है क्या ?
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Every dream starts with “what if”
“what if “ it gets a form of being real
And then it concludes into being real
A reality that leaves only the “what if “ …
-Tushar
Excellent poem, wordings and expression of thoughts!!
ReplyDeletespecially 2 and 4 stanzas are very nice. Really appreciate the depth of feelings expressed here!
One small suggestion:-
“Wo saath to hoonge har waqt, ‘magar’
Par tanha pal phir bhi hoge bahoot”
For the second poem, thought provoking question has been put forward here, which majority of people (if not all) face at some point of time in their lives……
One more thing, here, it seemed that the Hindi version and English version convey different meanings?
I know what you meant by “it concludes into being real” (maybe you meant- “it concluded in a harsher reality”) but I think it somehow doesn’t convey it rightly…….
-Deepak
Too good..
ReplyDelete-Chakresh